She caressed the black velvet box sheltering her precious pearl set ,reliving those moments when he first clasped it ,his fingers ever so lightly dancing on her neck.
How she wished she knew he had so little time left, dreams for a lifetime snatched away in a moment, the wheel of time refusing to turn back.
She wished she could erase the times they fought, egos screeching making their unwanted presence known, days spent pining away for each other drowned in seas of sorrow.
She wished she woke up next to him ,nuzzling him , his voice whispering into her ear, sending tingles down her spine.
She wished he was right there to lock her in his strong arms , kiss away her tears and hear him say "I'm back, love".
This post is for five sentence fiction wishes prompt
How she wished she knew he had so little time left, dreams for a lifetime snatched away in a moment, the wheel of time refusing to turn back.
She wished she could erase the times they fought, egos screeching making their unwanted presence known, days spent pining away for each other drowned in seas of sorrow.
She wished she woke up next to him ,nuzzling him , his voice whispering into her ear, sending tingles down her spine.
She wished he was right there to lock her in his strong arms , kiss away her tears and hear him say "I'm back, love".
This post is for five sentence fiction wishes prompt
26 comments:
aah the pain and regret! beautifully penned sahiti :)
Wonder why many people who show true love as suffering. Eventually that's truth because one who can love true can feel the emotional part of it. Others perish. Sad but it is the way it is. Good one ji.
Sad tale beautifully expressed :)
How we wish all this...wish the wishes come true...
Nicely expressed, Sahiti.
How difficult it must be for her to think of the 'what-ifs'. Very moving, Sahiti.
Shailaja/The Moving Quill
Its just the universe's way of saying...
You just cant have everything!
No words to express even though I wish to write something. Her pain is so deep. I wish that nobody faces such a painful situation.
Regards,
Sindhu
Tantu
The Arts & Me
Beautiful narrative..I wish are wishes come true and she snuggles near him again .
So sad! I like "dreams for a lifetime snatched away in a moment." :D
Very touching.
Well told.
Touching Story
Tina from The Sunny Side of Life
Thankyou Swathi :):)
I guess pain and love go hand in hand, thanks Dinesh..
Thanks Ananya :)
Thanks a ton Anita :)
Thanks for the lovely words, Shailaja..
Very true Lance..
You are too generous with words Sindhu..
Thanks Sushree..keep visiting.
Glad you liked it Avra sha..:)
Thanks Indrani..
Thanks Tina..keep dropping by.
Thankyou Aliasgar..
A sad tale indeed.. But beautifully penned.. :)
Thanks for visiting Deepa..
Thanks Anu :):)
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