She was excited to return home after six months,her company finally made it big.she longed to rush into her fiancés arms and make up for the lost time. she hugged him tightly only to find his arms firmly by his sides.he began awkwardly,"I'm kind of seeing ... someone".after what seemed like an eternity, he told with certainty""Its over".her thoughts went back to the day when she received a lukewarm response from him on deciding to go ahead with her work and postpone the wedding.she wished she knew then what she knew now.it was too late.
This post is for Write tribe 100 words on saturday prompt
This post is for Write tribe 100 words on saturday prompt
18 comments:
:( Sad for her. Only if he had waited :(
Some things are like that. They never wait for us. And we never know when they go away :(
Nice take on the prompt :)
Very sad! Things like these happen every now n then..!
Yup.that's how life goes, thanks for the comment sreeja :)
I agree ashwin..
It's must be heart-breaking for her when he choose to walk away and she was full of life. Distance did not make the heart grow fonder.
Time is a great healer and she will meet someone who will understand her better.
Thanks for the lovely words kalpana :):)
Very poignant! Such things are too heart rending.
Thankyou usha ma'am for the kind words :)
That is sad! How dare he do that to her?? It happens though. Great take on the prompt.
Yup, that's how life is, thanks for dropping by kathy :)
That's sad. Such is the reality of life. Few things never wait. Nicely written :)
only true love can wait, it's better to get away with such a man
Survivor
Thanks rohan :)
Yeah cifar..
It hurts terribly when you give your heart away and have it broken into smithereens :( Hopefully, the lesson made her a stronger person. Nice take, Sahiti :)
Thanks for dropping by shailaja :):)
That's so sad and heart wrenching. Very well written with the emotions in the right place bout' deception.
Thanks vishal :)
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